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His hands might be a little big on that last panel, they extend out too far.

I like your lineart, its nice and smooth, though you might want to clean up your lines a bit, for example, the lines on his shirt being seen through his fingers, etc.

Still, great story and you draw expressions well, i also like the way you tone. :D

posted by Amante on October 25th, 2009, 12:20 am



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