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This has a lot of potential, I like the plotline and the fight scenes, I look forward to seeing you be more inventive with scenes and trying out more action poses.

posted by cluchan on April 21st, 2009, 11:44 am





 

I'm liking it more!! I keep looking foreward to this one, but it's time for some honest critique...*ahem*
*Great poses! But, try to mix it up when it comes to the angles.
*Very VERY effective use of speed lines. I get the same actiony rush from reading this as I do with Bleach and Naruto!
*When it comes to the concept... A little to similar to Bleach... what's interesting is, Bleach was almost rejected because the editors thought it was too much like Yu Yu Hakusho, so he improved it. Read more manga that you find interesting, and you'll get more inspired!
Good luck!!

posted by SHOCK! Shoujo Revolution on May 1st, 2009, 4:56 pm



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